Observations!

Okay...while I'm waiting for the lovely 'Popular' clip to download (everyone worship deeperinlove...so patient...it's taking around an hour and a half to send me these Wicked clips, but hey look I'm still getting em!) I started poking around the original story. Now, I know Brendan wanted to see the first draft...and Lisha does, too. LOL. Well okay let's do some comparison.

( Original Chapter One )

Ahh, ahh, the pain! The pain!

( New Chapter One )

Well...okay...unedited new first chapter...way too fast, with too many charries. But, well, yeah.

Moving along...

( Original Chapter 2 )

Can we say..."MY EYES, MY EYES!!!"

( New Chapter Two )

Ahh, the Lisha-written Truce has a brilliant calming effect for those who thought they were traumatized by the original one.

Okay, okay, time to skip...just so we can see...exactly how much the storylines changed....well what chapter shall we use...

*Comes across five, skims it, and then gasps* OH MY GOD. IT'S SO UNREASONABLE...AND AND...author note...of 'How's that, Plot Bunny Goddess?'...see, there's only room for one kind of story goddess. Which is EXACTLY why Lisha stayed as Spice/Insanity Goddess and we chased Lar away. *twitch.*

( Original Chapter Four )

OH MY GOD IT'S STRAIGHT AIANNA! AND RECIN! *Has missed Recin.* Major lack of Trey-age, though.

( New Chapter 4 )

And that concludes our show and tell for the evening! It's interesting...I...um...guess...but look, introductions of Aia and Zace and Cy are in the same chappies. Be proud (I, err, guess?)

Note: In the original chapter five, people working for Drake are sent to kill Trisha. And a scream can carry across town so Hawk can come and save her. Isn't that sweet? *Eye roll*

-Maddsies