The 8th Chapter
Feb. 8th, 2004 12:35 amUgh! I'm having weird problems.
I had this odd version of the first section that I wrote before I wrote the one that was all Morca focused. And I didn't open it well, I think I just plucked in the middle of a paragraph that I just have to start. Also it needs a lot to make it halfway good, but it's kinda a nice starting point for me to work with.
But Drake and Daken are talking, and Daken lights up a cigarette. They talk for a bit, and I need to add a little bit, but sooner or later Morca joins in (she kind of 'poofs' onto the scene as of now, will fix it) and she'll say a few things. At one point in the scene, I really, really want her to reach over, take Daken's cigarette that he's smoking, and take a drag from it. And for the life of me, I don't know why. It's weird for Morca...though I don't write her in post-Amit argument POV much, so maybe it's how she is and her muse is saying 'Let me be me, damnit'. Plus, dear Morca still does smoke occasionally.
But it's scaring me that, no matter WHAT, I end up making Morca do that, even if I try to completely write around it. It's weeeeird.
-Maddy
I had this odd version of the first section that I wrote before I wrote the one that was all Morca focused. And I didn't open it well, I think I just plucked in the middle of a paragraph that I just have to start. Also it needs a lot to make it halfway good, but it's kinda a nice starting point for me to work with.
But Drake and Daken are talking, and Daken lights up a cigarette. They talk for a bit, and I need to add a little bit, but sooner or later Morca joins in (she kind of 'poofs' onto the scene as of now, will fix it) and she'll say a few things. At one point in the scene, I really, really want her to reach over, take Daken's cigarette that he's smoking, and take a drag from it. And for the life of me, I don't know why. It's weird for Morca...though I don't write her in post-Amit argument POV much, so maybe it's how she is and her muse is saying 'Let me be me, damnit'. Plus, dear Morca still does smoke occasionally.
But it's scaring me that, no matter WHAT, I end up making Morca do that, even if I try to completely write around it. It's weeeeird.
-Maddy
