Jan. 13th, 2005

Mwahaha

Jan. 13th, 2005 05:49 pm
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So Mr. L had us do this whole exploding a moment thing...going into detail on one moment, and while we only had 3, 5-7 sentence paragraphs...I was happified slightly, because I got to write about IDINA! But I need some help before tomorrow, so if anyone feels like reading and telling me ways I could make it better (TWO peer reviews and nothing was changed. -.- Justin Becker was one of them...and his blew me away. It was gorgeously written and hell, I don't even LIKE basketball and I even felt how cool the moment was. And he didn't change mine. Ugh, JUSTIN.) please, please feel free to rip this to shreds. I'm somewhat proud, but it also feels disjointed to me, and not down to the detail I want. I have a specific image of what a moment exploding looks like, and well it's cooler than this. ^_^

Exploding a Moment - Defying Gravity )

Version 2, In Case I Change My Mind )

Annnd, there you go.

-Maddy

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